Critics with Clay Feet
B. Renner

(The following books are referred to in the essay below:

The Best American Poetry 1996
ed. by Adrienne Rich
Scribner 1996

The Best of the Best American Poetry 1988-1997
ed. by Harold Bloom
Scribner 1998

Twenty Questions
J. D. McClatchy
Columbia University Press 1998

Edwin Arlington Robinson
Mark Van Doren
Literary Guild 1927

The Name and Nature of Poetry
A. E. Housman
Macmillan 1933

A Publisher's Confession, New Edition
Walter H. Page
Heinemann 1924)

Let Harold Bloom and Adrienne Rich engage in all the fisticuffs they like concerning what is, and is not, memorable in contemporary American verse because, if one steps back from the fracas even an inch or two, one realizes that neither seems to have a clue. Bloom has been brilliant as a critic and assessor of the past, and Rich has been, in the past, a fine poet. But which of these qualifications has prepared them to deal with the arid place in which American verse now finds itself?
A much clearer perception , which takes into account the long range, is apparently at J. D. McClatchy's disposal, at least from time to time. In his essay "Twenty Questions" (first published in Princeton University Library Chronicle and now collected in Twenty Questions), McClatchy notes that, while Hiawatha hit the bestseller charts in 1855, Leaves of Grass was hardly noticed. Dickinson's poems remained unpublished until after her death (a full 35% of them not appearing until 1945). Thus neither of the two monumental American poets of the 19th century was even in the running for any contemporaneous critic who might have wished to create an "American canon" around the time of the Civil War. A more significant point for anyone who wishes to take any kind of valid look at the current "scene" is McClatchy's implication that current critics (a group which includes the poets themselves) seem unable to notice how much alike so many of our poets sound. He provides, as an analogy, the 1843 anthology Poets of Connecticut. The 44 poets, he tells us, "all sound the same" to our ears, while to the readers of 1843 there would have been obvious tonal differences. In the same way, "W.S. Merwin's oracular whispers and John Ashbery's rambling discourse and James Merrill's fizzy formal cocktails" will, to readers of the future, simply sound so much "flatter" than the poetry of the 18th century. And yet, in other essays in this new collection, McClatchy praises, sometimes very highly indeed, a number of the poets whose voices will some day be heard as only a part of "the tidal flow of the demotic into verse." McClatchy is not, I think, a praiser of all things "poetic," as so many of our poets are (he dishes, for example, Maya Angelou's inaugural poem of 1993), but neither is he always able to escape the limitations of too close a focus on things near at hand.
For comparison--and the comparison is more apt for Bloom than McClatchy--I would like to point you toward Edwin Arlington Robinson, a booklet by Mark Van Doren. Because the text places such a heavy emphasis on 1927's Tristram, I presume that Van Doren's study was commissioned by the Literary Guild to accompany its edition of that book. (Check any large urban library or well-stocked used bookstore for either title.) I have not read Van Doren's complete text because it becomes so tiresome after a while, but I have read enough to get the gist of his argument. Indeed, reduced to its kernelest of kernels, the gist is contained in the book's first six words: "The best of living American poets."
Now no one alive today would grant Robinson that title as of 1927. But before I go into a more pointed critique of Van Doren's position, a few of you might need to know that Mark Van Doren was himself an American poet--not a "mere" critic or academic--and might have been presumed, therefore, to have had a better grasp on the poetry of his time. He was an esteemed teacher and published quite a number of collections in his life, though today he is as forgotten as John Hall Wheelock or William Vaughn Moody. (In fact, his only "recent" claim to fame would be as a character in Robert Redford's film Quiz Show-- the game show "cheater" was Van Doren's son.)
In order to gauge the scale of Van Doren's misunderstanding of the poetry of his time, we must ask ourselves, "Whom else might he have chosen as America's best?" Perhaps first to come to mind are a couple of "youngsters" whom Van Doren probably would not have even considered--Ezra Pound and T. S. Eliot. By 1927, Pound had completed all of his "early"work and gathered it into Personae, a book which includes the incredible "classical" beauties of Homage to Sextus Propertius, the "modernism" of Hugh Selwyn Mauberly, the faux-antique "Ballad of the Goodly Fere," and the quasi-translations of Cathay. Quite enough work, at a high enough standard, to make him--in my judgment--not just the best living American poet in 1927, but also almost certainly the most significant American poet of the 20th century. Maybe you disagree.
Then turn to Eliot who, by 1927, had published everything of stature he would ever publish, except for Ash-Wednesday and Four Quartets , the latter of which contains far more "prose" than "poetry," line breaks notwithstanding. At this point, in 1998, I will argue that Van Doren was correct to exclude Eliot from consideration, though probably for all the wrong reasons.
But let us set these two great "modernists" aside, and remind ourselves as well that Wallace Stevens and William Carlos Williams were scarcely known in 1927. Are there not other more "traditional" poets Van Doren might have considered?
Certainly. Though nothing he subsequently published would ever equal his "masterpiece" of 1916, Edgar Lee Masters was still a significant presence in the '20's, and Spoon River Anthology remains one of the very few books of American poetry which people recognize by title and which is still in print as an individual volume. Carl Sandburg was a national figure, and Edna St. Vincent Millay was--at 35--already a Pulitzer Prize winner. But, most surprising, Van Doren's pronouncement sacrifices Robert Frost to Robinson. Even today, when Frost is much less beloved and venerated than 70 years ago--and perhaps appreciated more accurately--this relatively low position for him is startling. Is Frost not both more popular and subtler than Robinson, both more polished and more colloquial? "Certainly!" virtually everyone of us would say. And yet, as if to give more substance to Van Doren's claim, the Pulitzer committees clearly esteemed Robinson as highly as Frost during this "golden" age of American verse.
That Van Doren, a man who should have been able to know better, could be so short-sighted ought, I suppose, to make us feel better about the critical shortcomings of our own times. Another little book, however, published only 6 years after Van Doren's, comes as an abrupt reminder that it is possible to read poetry with both an aesthetic sense and an intellectual rigor. I am speaking now of A. E. Housman's The Name and Nature of Poetry . Housman, to be sure, needs no introduction to any literate audience, though his output was much smaller than Van Doren's, and he has been dead longer--by mentioning which I mean to suggest that we have had more time to forget him. We have not. And to be completely fair to Van Doren (and Bloom and McClatchy and Rich), I should point out that Housman makes no reference to contemporary poetry in his essay and thus is not trying to second-guess "posterity". But he doesn't need to, because--if we apply his critical standards to the poetry around us (or that around him in 1933)--we can do that for ourselves. What Housman makes obvious in the text of this lecture is that he, perhaps unlike Van Doren and company, knows not only how to recognize what poetry is, but also what it is not. Even so, he is disparaging of his own "gifts" as a critic, warning his hearers from the outset--

Whether the faculty of literary criticism is the best gift that Heaven has in its treasuries I cannot say; but Heaven seems to think so, for assuredly it is the gift most charily bestowed.

One of his first points (new formalists, beware!) is that there is "a conception of poetry which is not fulfilled by pure language and liquid versification. . . ." As Housman's poetry is in fact one of the few notable bodies of work of the past century to meet those qualifications, we should certainly pay attention when he tells us not to be deceived by those crafts. Poetry, he says, "involves the presence in (language and versification) of something which moves and touches in a special and recognisable way." Note that he is not surrendering formal aspects, but insisting rather that formal aspects are not enough--they must convey something which "moves and touches" us. What Housman is putting forth then is a balance--or, more accurately, the presence of two distinct aspects (or types?) of writing, both of which must be present for "poetry" to exist. As regards the poetry of the 18th century, which McClatchy praises as so much more versatile than our own, Housman states emphatically that, as delightful a literature as it is, most of it is not "poetry" at all. It is instead wit--"as defined by Johnson, 'a combination of dissimilar images, or discovery of occult resemblances in things apparently unlike'." Furthermore Housman says that the 18th century poets were engrossed in simile and metaphor, which they did not use "to be helpful, to make their sense clearer or their conceptions more vivid. . . . Their object was to startle by novelty and amuse by ingenuity a public whose one wish was to be so startled and amused." We may replace simile and metaphor with psychological trauma and confessional brazenness , and we will have the object of too much American poetry of the past 40 years. And the pleasure to be had from any of this is "not a poetic pleasure", nor is the product inducing this pleasure "poetry," at least not in most cases.
On the other hand, Housman admits that "(t)he literature of the eighteenth century. . . is an admirable and most enjoyable thing." But "excellent literature which is also poetry is not therefore excellent poetry. . . . Eighteenth-century poetry is in fact a name for two different things, which ought to be kept distinct." Here Housman provides us with what might be our most essential "clue" for handling contemporary American verse and trying to see through the hoopla and folderol to what is really and authentically "poetry." Much, we might say, of our own verse at this time is not really verse or poetry at all--it is a kind of epigrammatic prose, designed for ease of reading (McClatchy's "tidal flow of the demotic") and providing validation of both the poet's and the reader's "everyday" experiences. In the name of "depth", it presents us with a psychologically "freighted" occurrence, the meaning of which is condensed into a concluding sentence or phrase no more poetic (and not much more intelligent or pithier) than a bumper sticker.
The poets who have grown tired of these relentless vignettes have too often replaced emotional, Oprah-style earnestness with 1) a renewed attention to the natural world (scientific travel writing masquerading as poetry), or 2) intellectually demanding imagery and content (the essay masquerading as poetry), or 3) entirely disjointed phrases, clauses, and images (non-sense masquerading as poetry). All of these "styles" of poetry have disciples, fans and defenders, but the partisans are missing the point: they are like the "Wordsworthians" which Housman (by way of Matthew Arnold) cites-- "They were most attracted by what may be called (Wordsworth's) philosophy" and thus "were apt to praise their poet for the wrong things." On the other hand they were not appreciably attuned to "that thrilling utterance which pierces the heart and brings tears to the eyes of thousands who care nothing for his opinions and beliefs. . . ."
Exactly.
"Poetry is not the thing said but a way of saying it." How foolish that any of us, at any time, should need to reiterate that most basic principal. And yet how much of the critical space given to contemporary poetry is devoted precisely to "the thing said" rather than to the saying?
The jacket of Housman's lecture advertises the Macmillan poetry list for the fall of 1933, not one of which, to my knowledge, is in print today, unless it be John A. Lomax's Ballads and Folk Songs of America, which is not technically a poetry collection anyway. Of the remaining 7 titles, the contents of only one (Sara Teasdale's Strange Victory) are easily available (in her Collected Poems.) Five of the other six volumes are by poets no one reads anymore, the most "famous" of which are John Masefield and Robert P. Tristram Coffin. The remaining title (and the one leading the list) is yet another of E. A. Robinson's book-length poems, Talifer, even more forgotten today than Tristram.
If Housman's essay suggests ways by which critics can indeed pierce through the babble and flurry of the contemporary world to get to what is essential in the literature being written right now, the examples of the other authors I have cited (as well as the bald face of history) sadly suggest otherwise. Walter H. Page, an important American editor at the turn of the last century, should perhaps have the last word. In his collection of essays entitled A Publisher's Confession, published first in 1905, he writes, "The great difficulty is to recognize literature when it first comes in at the door, for one quality of literature is that it is not likely even to know itself. The one thing that is certain is that the critical crew and the academic faculty are sure not to recognize it at first sight."